Young gun

A creative way to vent out your frustration. So now I’m like you, With plain layered hair, Studs in my ears, Wishing I was there. Back where I was, On ...

The bitter reality finally.....your poem had deep meaning and a deep message to reminds me of how we can never unite and accept each other for our differences.And with all ...

I could slightly relate to this. Many times you just wait for the weekends to come and they itself seem horrible because everyone is so involved in what they do ...

Frank, clear and no-nonsense is what this is about. That girl” is gone. "That girl" is creating her own life. Not many times do I come across such resolves in ...

This is really confusing. The writer should make up her mind if she hates or likes him.But people in love often behave kind of strange, so that might explain things. ...

I liked the way the poem folds as a story from the beginning to the end. This is among one of the few pieces that I can say are perfect ...

This poem brings mixed reactions. What is not clear,as it is many times, is why the other person was not let into her life and how excessively farsighted the narrator ...

I'm not quite good at guessing the hidden meanings in a poem but I'll give this a try. It would be the narrator's jealousy towards happy couples.Thought the poem the ...

More than a poem, this sounded like friendship day text messages put together.Sounds like some similar quotes selected from an Internet site. What is not needed is use words like ...

This story reminds me of one with a similar line,except that it was a poem. The kid was around the same age.She too was forbidden to leave the house because ...

This was a good one to read.Some excellent thinking towards the end.Also,excellent display of how young professionals have very little time to spare for family relations. I don't know how ...

This was a fantastic piece of work. The way you enlightened us on death was very effective. I really liked these lines: When the dead know peace; the mortals cry. ...

This was a very gripping and nice story. I liked the way it was told through the voices of the survivor's.The horrid description of the disease was handled very well ...

I liked this one right till the end.You could feel all the emotions of the speaker-Anger,helplessness,bitter nostalgia and her wish to regain her innocence. The best part of all where ...

I suppose this was written after seeing some ancient war movie...or maybe not,nevertheless,it was fine. The speaker seemed like a king looking out of his tower or a peasant looking ...